巍立风云

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发表于 2005-5-11 23:14 | 显示全部帖子

1.水平线不直;
2.构图太散，主题不突出，虽然色彩很好，但“巍“的味道没表现出来，建议裁掉照片中无关紧要的部分。

A pessimist sees the difficulty in every opportunity; an optimist sees the opportunity in every difficulty - Winston Churchill

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发表于 2005-5-11 23:23 | 显示全部帖子

[这个贴子最后由atat在 2005/05/11 03:27pm 第 2 次编辑]

斗胆按个人的理解裁减了一下，与小野大虾探讨。

A pessimist sees the difficulty in every opportunity; an optimist sees the opportunity in every difficulty - Winston Churchill